Camera Girl: “I hate nature. Screw this Russian kid. I’m going home to develop photos.”
I really like the bike riding panels. Getting two characters in the same panel, particularly your sizes, is so hard. You accomplished it though. The only critique I have is that the girl’s eyes are a little wonky. It looks like the kind of expression after someone has taken a hit on the head. Maybe make her irises closer together because I think you’re going for more a wide-eyed surprised look.
Which panel do you mean? The one before the uphill?
The girl is loopy/low-energy kind of character who’s always looking a bit bored. She lives in the same area with Nikita so her surprise is more on the level “…oh….well shit….” than flat out genuine surprise. She knows the area but didn’t guess she’d have to ride over that exact place. So I’m not sure if I can agree with your critique. Respectfully so!
Camera Girl: “I hate nature. Screw this Russian kid. I’m going home to develop photos.”
I really like the bike riding panels. Getting two characters in the same panel, particularly your sizes, is so hard. You accomplished it though. The only critique I have is that the girl’s eyes are a little wonky. It looks like the kind of expression after someone has taken a hit on the head. Maybe make her irises closer together because I think you’re going for more a wide-eyed surprised look.
She’s pretty much done with all of this.
Which panel do you mean? The one before the uphill?
The girl is loopy/low-energy kind of character who’s always looking a bit bored. She lives in the same area with Nikita so her surprise is more on the level “…oh….well shit….” than flat out genuine surprise. She knows the area but didn’t guess she’d have to ride over that exact place. So I’m not sure if I can agree with your critique. Respectfully so!
All in good respects. (y)